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高考书面表达独家提分方法

作者:徕课英语发表时间:2018-05-24 15:02:28   浏览:
「导读」高考书面表达在150分的试卷中占25分,比例不小,而且相对而言这是一个比较好拿分的题,所以想要在英语学科不拖后腿就应该重视书面表达的得分,考出一个好成绩。

如何提高高考中书面表达的分数

要拿到本题分数,首先,基本要求是要能在要点的范围内写对句子,这就要求我们掌握好五个基本句型,再加上在句子中用对单词的形式,这就可拿到一定的分数。另外,如果想要拿高分,还必须让你所写的句子之间有很好的衔接,并且句子也不能过于简单和单调,尽可能让表达形式多样化,行文更流畅。请看以下例子: 

改写前:

Yesterday I went to a book shop. The shop is near my home. I bought a book. The book was written by a famous writer. This book is very interesting. I finish reading it. I lend it to you.
 

改写后:

Yesterday I went to a book shop nearmy home, whereI bought an interesting book (which was) writtenby a famous writer. After I finish reading it, I’ll lend it to you.
 

高考书面表达外教提分方法
 

例二

改写前:

There is a girl in the village. Her name is Xiao Fang. She is beautiful and kind. She has a pair of beautiful big eyes. Her hair is in thick and long braids.
 

改写后:

There is a girl named Xiao Fang in the village, who is beautiful and kind. She has a pair of beautiful big eyes andthick and long braids.

或:There is abeautiful and kindgirl in the village, whosename is Xiao Fang. She has a pair of beautiful big eyes and her hair is in thick and long braids.

或: In this village lives a beautiful and kindgirl named Xiao Fang, whohas pair of beautiful big eyes and thick long braids.
 

强化表达的训练方法推荐
 

例三

改写前:

I talked with Li Hua on this matter in this room. We talked for two hours. It began at 2:00 . It ended at four in the afternoon. I returned to my office for a meeting. I’ll talk with my boss about the problems. The problem is about our new company in America.

改写后:

After talking with LiHua on this matter in this room for two hours from 2:00 to4:00 in the afternoon, I returned to my office for a meeting withmy boss about the problems thathas something to do withour new company in America.
 

  从以上三个例子不难看出,改写前每个句子都没问题,意思表达也清楚,但看起来很不舒服。如果在书面表达中用的是这种孤立的过于简单的句子,很难想像会拿到比较高的分数。但经过改写后,效果就大不相同。为了让句子变得更优美,看起来更舒服,我们惯用的手段如下:
 

高考书面表达常用的几种构造方法

1并列连词

用并列连词把两个简单的句子连起来。如上边第二例。

2 从属连词

用从属连词把某些短小的句子改成从句。以上三个例子中都有用到。

非谓语动词形式

把某些短小句子改为非谓语动词形式作状语、定语等。上边例一和例二都有用到。

4 介词短语

把某些简短句子改为介词短语作定语或状语。上边例一和例三都有用到。

5 形容词

把原来的某个系结的形容词改成作定词。如例二。

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